2. Advantages of outlining like I said keeps me organized.

3. Thinking about the audience helps me revise to be more persuasive. Adding variety to my paper helps avoid being directed to a certain audience rather than appealing to everyone.

4. The exploratory paper is basically the summary of what you think the author is writing about. This will help pave the way to write in your own opinion because you get to agree and disagree with the author’s opinion.

5. Read critically 24 hours after writing to peer review, then seek opinion of classmates. Or get in groups and get a group opinion on your paper as you give opinions to others. This will give you ideas on how to revise your paper.

In ‘ We’re Scaring Our Children to Death’, Peggy Noonan expresses the political and cultural problems that scare our children.  The author explains that children have to be protected from certain things like terrorism, and for instance, the mass murders that took place at Virginia Tech.  Noonan criticizes television shows for violent programs that open up children’s imaginations to a technical fantasy world.  I believe that children very susceptible minds and will believe anything they see.  This article is directed mostly to the media and also in some degree to parents whom careless what they’re children see or hear on the news or radio.  Peggy Noonan compares and contrasts from when she was a child in the ‘50s and ‘60s, and the many duck-and-cover drills that they had to learn.  “But now of days it’s a million duck-and-cover drills, a thousand alarms, a steady drumbeat of things to fear”, Noonan admits.  Even if that era was boring as she says, it explains why the author would want to express her opinion on the matter.  Firstly she had some degree of experience of being frightened as a kid and secondly she probably has kids of her own that she feels strongly subjected to protect against the media and politics.

Another sub-argument Noonan discusses is how more and more children are being prescribed antidepressants and anti-anxiety drugs.  Can there be a connection with Noonan’s argument and these prescriptions?  You’d might think so because when ABC did a child abduction special, reporter John Stossel asked children if they were scared of being abducted while they were sleeping.  Many kids said yes because they were scared of the unknown and not knowing what’s going to happen while they’re asleep.  The author would probably be very angry of this television special.  Why would our media deliberately try to scare children?  Is it to prepare for a tougher real world as they grow up?  This world we live in is definitely an adult world.  Our children are just a secondary thought.  Noonan thinks we care too much about money, even ourselves rather than our kids.

This rhetorical situation really has no affect upon me.  I remember my childhood and I can’t ever remember being ‘Scared to death’ of anything the media reported.  While reading this article, I never really agreed with the author’s opinion.  Children need to adapt to real world circumstances and why not ‘Scare them to death’, at least they will learn what’s going on with our ‘grown up’ world.

Academic Universe: ‘world’s largest scholarly, multi-discipline, full-text database’ for peer-reviewed articles from 4,000 periodical titles.

World Wide Web: Free and available to everyone.

2. Bibliography: alphabetically arranged list of evaluated sources into a computer file.

Annotated Bibliography: Helps you visualize sources, their basic content and reactions to them as a unit of information gathered in one place.

3. Is the source associated with an organization, is source listed under reputable domain, is source directed mainly to extremists? etc.

4. To make your research as efficient as possible.

5. Plagiarism is the copying of someone’s work without giving them credit. Compare your passage to the author’s and change if necessary to avoid plagiarism.

I believe this quote expresses what do not understand when we watch television. It’s saying to us that when we watch tv, we learn without knowing it and we pay our cable provider for this. Our nation is a constant learning environment from which we can learn from one another and why not put that knowledge on television where we can all benefit from that information.

In ‘ We’re Scaring Our Children to Death’, Peggy Noonan expresses the political and cultural problems that scare our children.  The author explains that children have to be protected from certain things like terrorism, and for instance, the mass murders that took place at Virginia Tech.  Noonan criticizes television shows for violent programs that open up children’s imaginations to a technical fantasy world.  I believe that children very susceptible minds and will believe anything they see.  This article is directed mostly to the media and also in some degree to parents whom careless what they’re children see or hear on the news or radio.  Peggy Noonan compares and contrasts from when she was a child in the ‘50s and ‘60s, and the many duck-and-cover drills that they had to learn.  “But now of days it’s a million duck-and-cover drills, a thousand alarms, a steady drumbeat of things to fear”, Noonan admits.  Even if that era was boring as she says, it explains why the author would want to express her opinion on the matter.  Firstly she had some degree of experience of being frightened as a kid and secondly she probably has kids of her own that she feels strongly subjected to protect against the media and politics.

Another sub-argument Noonan discusses is how more and more children are being prescribed antidepressants and anti-anxiety drugs.  Can there be a connection with Noonan’s argument and these prescriptions?  You’d might think so because when ABC did a child abduction special, reporter John Stossel asked children if they were scared of being abducted while they were sleeping.  Many kids said yes because they were scared of the unknown and not knowing what’s going to happen while they’re asleep.  The author would probably be very angry of this television special.  Why would our media deliberately try to scare children?  Is it to prepare for a tougher real world as they grow up?  This world we live in is definitely an adult world.  Our children are just a secondary thought.  Noonan thinks we care too much about money, even ourselves rather than our kids.

This rhetorical situation really has no affect upon me.  I remember my childhood and I can’t ever remember being ‘Scared to death’ of anything the media reported.  While reading this article, I never really agreed with the author’s opinion.  Children need to adapt to real world circumstances and why not ‘Scare them to death’, at least they will learn what’s going on with our ‘grown up’ world.

Reader- This text would appeal to people who are for tougher gun laws undoubtedly. I think the author is trying to envision an audience that has had enough of seeing anyone buying guns that are used for none other than to kill people.  Also I feel that the author has a great deal of sympathy to the victims’ families and anyone else who have been affected by gun violence.

Author- Like I said I think that the author cares a lot about the victims’ families; he expresses his outrage to gun stores selling guns to people who have a mental illness. Also the fact that anyone can walk right into a store and buy a semi-automatic weapon without being checked is what bothers the author the most.

Constraints- Undoubtedly as a nation, we saw what happened at Virginia Tech and were stunned by the news of a shooting. I was very angry to hear this news because all of the news stations found the video recordings of Cho Seung-Hui’s final words of anger towards people who he called ‘snobs’ and ‘rich kids’.  I don’t think anyone could feel sorry for a person like that when no one bothered him or gave him any reason to be angry. The author of this text probably feels the same way that anybody would.

Exigence- I think the text is a very convincing subject for us to discuss and see what we can do to change or improve gun laws. The author convinces the audience to see his point of view. 

Rhetorical Analysis for ‘Shootings’ by Adam Gopnik (2007) in CR page 124-126

English 101, Section 33

9/5/07

SWA 3: Exercise 2a, EA pp. 20-21

Human nature is to disagree and have conflicts/arguments. There are many different ways of arguing a point to get your audience to listen. I see myself as a negotiator rather than an arguer. I use both consensual and adversial techniques to back my claim. I believe I can be very helpful as a teacher in expressing to my students a different way of thinking and seeing both sides of the fence persay of an argument.  

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